It was a soulless day.I was just dozing off.My mobile rings,and its my friend who tells me to leave for her estate as they have planned a theme party.
It was a five hours drive to the estate.I could see the bizzare shaped moon hanging in the crimson skies by the time I reached the farm house.Much to my horror,there was noone.Only thing that was present was utter darkness.
I was alone in the eerie looking farm house which was in the middle of nowhere.
All I could hear was the howling of the wolves and my rapidly increasing heartbeat.
Now I could here footsteps approaching me.Without even looking back I ran like a bat out of hell into the farmhouse whose doors were wide open which felt like the farmhouse wanted me to enter it.I then,shut the doors.
I searched for the knife,entered the gloomy bedroom and tried to sleep.I heard the footsteps again but only this time it was from the attic.
I tried to console myself saying that it was just a figment of my imagination.But,No it wasn’t.I could here the footsteps from the basement of the dead.
I took my courage in both hands along with the knife and an almost burntout candle and went after the footsteps.I could here the footsteps all around the house.I saw a blue light beaming like an azure sky.It was coming out of a rustic box which was beautifully carved and the word pesadilla engraved on it.I opened the box and a headless lady whose hoodie was floating in thin air appeared infront of me.
She said that her name is pesadilla and asked me to wakeup.
I was jolted awake from my frightmare.
My mobile rings.
For those who do not know pesadilla means a nightmare in Spanish.
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A nice combination of pandoras box and nightmare . Awesome
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A short and crisp one. Nice
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An interesting post!! Very much different in itself!!
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eerie suspense…
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Glad you liked it.😆
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Good one!
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Suspenseful!
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😊glad you liked the suspense!
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I was hooked from the very beginning! You have a wonderful way with words!
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Thank you so much😊
I am very glad that you liked it.
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Amazing!
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A good story, reflecting how the immediate environment affects dreams
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Thank you.Glad that you liked it.
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So crisp and crunchy. Great suspense. I was in awe at the level of maturity of your writing. Well done!!!!!!!!!!
More !!!!!!!! needed.
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I am so happy and glad that you liked.
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Yes me like long time. Cutting and Crisp.
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Very clever. The talent does make me
Smile I have to admit
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I loved your blogs too.
I mean it.
Not just because you liked mine!
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Blog love? 😇
You could try and write a comedic piece next ? 🙂
I’m terrible at humour but I do appreciate a good laugh, even at my owns expense 😉
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Yes.Sure I will try.
Thanks for the idea though!
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Anytime. Vote yes!
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