It was just another day
I was alone in the city of dreams
Made my breakfast
Got ready and left for work
As usual, at work, no one even acknowledged my presence.
As usual, Had the sandwich made by me,alone in the cafeteria
Time flew
I reached home
I knew, even if the world ignored me, my mom wouldn’t. She always calls me at six in the evening.
I was waiting eagerly for the call.
But to my surprise, I saw her at my house.
She was acting a little weird.
This time even she ignored me.
It was the time I realised that I was dead!
©vikramhere
this is both sad and beautiful vikram, thank you for sharing it 😌🌷
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Glad that you liked.
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Very much 😊
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Ooohhh this is kinda dark but beautiful..
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Thank you 😀
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Beautiful but the other side of story is always heart aching
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Thank you so much 😀
Yes, a pain at the end.
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Just wonderful 🙂
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Thank you Ben😀
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Well done Vikram. The poem is so calm and talk about an ordinary day ( do they exist ),
Then the last line, wow, I didn’t see that coming.
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Thank you so much for reading.
Wanted to write something with a twist at the end.
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The ending was something!
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Thanks for reading Rishhu😀
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Welcome!
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Beautifully written!
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I am glad that you liked it.
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Lovely but a bit sad too…
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Thank you for stopping by.
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Poignant,beautiful, with the perfect exclamation point in the end/
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Thank you so much 😀
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Oh gosh what a sad twist! 🌹
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Yeah!
Thank you for reading Arbie😀
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This is soo beautiful and such a sad twist…it’s just 🔥🔥🔥
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Thank you so much 😊
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Sad, a little dark, but beautiful. I love the plot twist at the end.
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Thank you Diana😀
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Most welcome. 🙂
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I feel blessed by your writing right now.
I found delight love in what you just wrote.
Am happy right now.
Again such a beautiful writing.
Enjoy Mr vkhram
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace ✌and Love ❤
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Thank you for reading😀
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Thanks Mr/Mrs for accepting and following my blog.
I’m available to read your post at my convenient time.
You have such an interesting topic I will love to read in
your blog.
I still remain the simple blogger…..
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace ✌and Love ❤
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I ‘m amazed to see the twist at end . It changed the whole theme . Witty and beautifully penned👌
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Thank you so much😀
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Welcome 😊
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Wow!!
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Thank you 😀
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Nice Twist! I was enthralled to the end!
dwight
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Thank you for reading😀
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You are welcome!
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Wow sad
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Yes, it is.
Thank you again😊
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mothers are so important!
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Oh my god yes.
Mom is love❤️
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yep!!!
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You have a thing for dark yet beautiful content. Loved reading this .
If you get time please do go through my work as well .
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Thank you. Sure I will
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