I slipped and fell
Labyrinth, was the place
Forbidden,was the entry
So was the exit
Little did I know
I fell in the abyss of feelings
©vikramhere
Life with a twist
I slipped and fell
Labyrinth, was the place
Forbidden,was the entry
So was the exit
Little did I know
I fell in the abyss of feelings
©vikramhere
Lovely poem and well explained the meaning of abyss!!
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Thank you 😊
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A nice poem with concealed meanings!
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Thank you so much😊
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So beautiful👍
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Thank you Ayush.
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Very good!!
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Thank you😊
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Beautiful!!
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Thank you😊
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Excellent.
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Thanks a lot.
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As always short but expressive lines .
PS . The sad reality is there is no exit
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Thanks a lot. Yes, never ending feelings and emotions.
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You said a lot with very few words. Love it.
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Thank you 😊
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EXQUISITE !!
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Thank you 😀
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Succinct, yet powerful. I did not expect the last sentence! Nice touch!
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Thanks so much😀
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So beautiful
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Thank you
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I did not see that last sentence coming! Great work as always.
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Thank you😀
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Most welcome. 🙂
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Emotions are definitely a maze. A beautiful way of expressing it!
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Thank you
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